Feedback - Postcard Triptych

Shelby Hawkins for Julia Thummel

If this isn't a web-friendly typeface, you might want to find a similar Google font to replace it with. I'm distracted by the way the text covers the characters' faces in the first image, because I think it's important to viewers to be able to identify these as Wes Anderson characters. I think the third image, optimized for iPhone view, is successful with the center-aligned type because it's consistent with Wes Anderson's treatment of titles. You could potentially use that style in your triptychs (although center-aligning text might sort of be cheating the challenge to make a truly responsive design).