Feedback for Alyse's postcard mockups:
- I can tell the font used here resembles the font used for the Harry Potter books, but maybe try using lowercase letters. All caps seems a little aggressive, and can be hard to read sometimes.
- Maybe try using periods - the quotes seem like unfinished thoughts.
- The relationship between the type and image seems kind of awkward at times, like the desktop Luna Lovegood and Sirius Black examples. The Luna one seems like there's too much space, while in the Sirius one it feels like the quote is squeezed into the top left corner. Maybe try playing around with different compositions/sizes of both the image and text to even out the balance.
- The dimensions of the desktop versions seem more square than a general browser window – the images might be cropped so keep in mind how it will look on different screens.
- The images and textured background work well the intended aesthetic and concept.