Feedback

• Honestly....looks pretty good
• Arrested Development yee
• love the choice of typeface
• you're perfect
• For some real feedback...maybe keep the illustration style consistent. Either the first or second is workin for me. But maybe the second.
• Letter spacing might be a little too much...but also...personally...I like it.
• I guess there could be issues with people not understanding these postcards if they don't watch arrested development. but also...I think that's probably the point. of the show. to confuse everyone.
• Standard things people say in critque: "experiment with the type!" "What if the type was really big and overwhelming the page?!" "What if the image came of the page?" "What if you put your post under water and photographed it?" "experiment!"
• ^All questions and concerns that I don't really agree with, but are probably required for me to ask since I'm critiquing this.
• Sorry for this terrible feedback.