Improvement Plan


Edits with Molly Magnell
  • The background - make more clear; doesn’t read as dress?
  • duality is good —> connection get’s lost between the two
  • add a title/artist on second part
  • top part: gif or picture? quality
  • looking into the possibility of having a title screen —> moving into lyric sheet
  • think about how much of the page the lyrics are gonna take up - scroling?
  • lighter body text
  • width of body text
  • use a google font/typekit
  • Original

    mockup

    New

    new