Feedback for Kiri, from Laura
- In general, I would try to create some sort of connection between your three designs, since they are a set (think about the images, color, font choice, even the quotes themselves) - keep some things consistent
- For your first image, it is a bit pixelated - maybe vectorize it?
- Your first design has a lot of empty, inactivated space
- Use an em dash for the quote credit
- For the mobile version of your first design, think about hierarchy between the image and the text, also the text alignment is a little weird
- Your second design's line spacing is too small in the computer version and too big in the mobile version
- Not sure you need the yellow frame on your last design
- But i like how you are emphasizing a certain part of the quote
- Again, think about the typefaces you use and their interaction with the images