Feedback for Nicole Fox


http://fall2016.wudesign.me/student/nfox/postcards/mockups/index.html

Recommendations
The concept is consistent and well-planned out! I really like how the vertical crop for all three versions are cropped in a way that only shows half of their faces consistently. Some minor changes you can do are
1) Photoshop the background color for the second image to a lighter or darker grey so the yellow can pop more and create better contrast
2) Recrop the horizontal version of the second group to have the right hair bun to avoid the awkward tangent line. Either find antoehr image that shows the whole bun or crop it more?
3) Move the line connecting the person and the quote up for the third group, so its the same as the last two (going off from the mouth area)
4) The third image could use a better resolution quality?

Overall I like the first one the most sinse it has the highest contrast and most interesing subject. It would be cool if you could recreate the high contrast for the second and third group to make the quotes pop more powerful!