Feedback for Dana Berger

• For most of the postcards, the quote tends to sit very close to the edge of the card, which I think makes it look somewhat uncosidered and cramped. I think it would look better if they were moved closer to the center of the card.
• For the first two smaller versions, I think it would look better if the text did not run across the full width of the card.
• I would reconsider center-aligning the text. I think it woudl look cleaner if it was left or right aligned, espcially when the text is sitting in the corner of the card like the first and last card.
• I'm not sure how I feel about the layouts when the quote and her name are separated, it feels somewhat disconected. Perhaps if you made the quotesfor the separated ones larger then it woudl work better
• Looking at the thrid versions, in particular, her name really gets lost, especially in the smaller version, because of how complex the background is. Maybe try making that photo black and white and see if that helps the clarity.
• For consistencies sake maybe it would be wise to keep the size relationship between the quote and name consistent.
• I woudl be warry of the black box behid the last quote. I don't think it looks bad, I just know they have told us not to use that in the past becacuse apparently it can be problematic in html
• All of the photos have her sitting in the middle of the card, which is fine, but it might be more visually interesting to have her in different parts of the composition for different cards. And that might also give you more room for the quotes.
• I think you've done a really great job of matching the quotes to the pictures. I think you get a great sense of who she was from the cards.