Providing feedback for Angela Pu
- The concept is Good Will Hunting quotes. By using images from the movie itself, it communicates this concept and goal well. Would it be possible to achieve this same effect though with photos not necessarily just of the actors?
- I think it's really clear what you're communicating. The images of the actors go well with the quotes you are using.
- The design's priorities seem to be the images, as they are nearly all close-ups of the actors, making them draw in a lot of attention.
- The close-up images combined with the large text conflict with each other a bit. The text could use a bit more breathing room, either by reducing it's size or scaling back the images some.
- The design should accommadate variability in browser width well, but you might need to take the point size down on some fonts to allow for a little more flexibility.
- The design is nice, but it could use a little more consistency in terms of the type. There is only one image that has black text, while all the rest are white. Also two of the quotes are italicized while one quote is not.
- Right now, the concept is driving the aesthetic.
- Your images are pretty low quality, which works okay for some, as it is an older movie (I don't think you'll be able to find super high quality images). But the last set of postcards are particularly bad quality, even in comparison to the others.
- In the second set of postcards, it seems a little odd that Robin Williams would flip sides from the larger version to the mobile version, and I'd consider keeping which side he's facing the same.
- As far as building it goes, I think it's definitely possible. Especially after making a few changes to the text, in order to prevent having to do a bunch of "in between" sizes.