Feeback for Molly Magnell by Dana Berger

Link to Molly's mockup

1. The type looks a little blurry and pixelized. Experiment with other typefaces
2. Note the name of the TV show
3. I like that the space between the quote gives emphasis to certain words like "three days," but maybe the space is too large. The words seem a little detached from the quote.
4. The quotes could have more of an impact if paired with bolder imagery, maybe from the TV show. The images now look like stock photos. However, you cropped the images well to fit a smaller display screen.
5. Try to aim for the level of contract you achieve in the third image. It makes the quote bold and easy to read.
6. The quote credit is universally too small.