Chantal Jahchan
- Is the typeface you chose available on either Typekit or Google Fonts?
- The images look like they could be a bit higher resolution, especially the smaller, more zoomed in ones.
- For your final small-screen mockup, I would add a slight drop shadow to the white text so that it shows up better on the light green background. This will likely also be helpful for the in-between states.
- Overall I think the design is successful – You chose an appropriate typeface that matches the tone of the images, and you laid them out beautifully and consistently.