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• There isn't much of a concept. Maybe try coming up with a one sentence thesis for the collection. (Like, "Vetonica Sawyer's life is dark and twisted.")
• The text is well placed and readable, but could be more interesting in its design. The font is a little bland.
• The images look good. The mobile versions look a little fat to me? Might be good to look up standard mobile resolutions. As they stand these should be easy to build, but this could change as the design progresses.