For my first revision, I decided that I wanted to experiment more with video, as I already felt comfortable working with background images, embedded videos, buttons, etc. after using them to make my initial lyrics sheet. However, I still wanted to keep Kelly's advice on my first mockup in mind, so I chose to float the lyrics to the right and place them over an opaque grey box, so that they would be more legible. Because the music video has a muted color palette, I considered using brighter/multiple colors in the lyrics portion of the page, but I reconsidered, thinking they may make the content less legible, as they had in my previous mockup.