Old Version:


New Version:



I made a lot of changes to my original version. My first change was to change the colors of my title. The second change was to italicize all words in parenthesis. I also decided to ditch my text box concept and go for an open scroll look, therefore using the clone tool to get rid of the woman in the bottom so that nothing would obstruct the view of the text. My fourth change was to make the music player smaller and simpler and more efficient to use. Fifth, I changed the color of my background and added an atmospheric gradient effect to add another dimension of slight warmth to the chill, cool blue tone. My next change was to move my title to a left side alignment rather than a classic centered alignment and to the side of the page to offset the text.