Composition 1 : I think the desktop version is very dynamic. There is something very nice about the large empty space and the way it makes the spread feel almost as if it is a spread in a magazine. The phone version does not have that same sense of openness and therefore does not feel cohesive with the desktop version. Perhaps making the font smaller would solve this problem.
Composition 2 : Again, the desktop spread has a nice sense of space that allows the text to be the main focus. I would consder the placement of the text in the smaller version; when the text overlaps with the sweater makes it hard to see the text.
Composition 3 : I would consier moving the text over to the right or wrapping it differently because the composition does not give the same sense of openness that the other two do. Considering the quote is about a woman as the goddess of the streets, would it make more sense for the smaller version to highlight the woman putting her shoes on instead of the barefoot one?