I received feedback from Ji Lee. My action plan included adjusting my leading for my title, blurring my image behind my text so I did not lose my text in the darker areas and taking out the album cover. I decided I would add a play and pause button for the users to listen to the song while on my page instead of having a link to the music video in the album cover, which was my plan for my first mockup. I also made my picture full bleed so I could accommodate for varying user browser windows widths. I also designed my page to fit within 1024 pixels with extra room around. I also realized I needed to find a typeface that was included in Google Fonts.

Below is my revised mockup.